Personal Storytelling Through Poetry by Nancy Newlin


How do poems grow? They grow out of your
life.
-Robert Penn Warren

     I became a writer in New Hampshire. I’m
not talking about being a professional writer, but I began to think
of myself as a writer after participating in a series of summer
literacy institutes at the University of New Hampshire. In fact, I say often… the
only good writing I ever do is when I’m in New Hampshire.
As I was
preparing for this blog, I thought what on earth do I know about storytelling,
as a novice storyteller, that I can share with others? So I did what I often do
when I’m thinking. I began to look through my writer’s notebooks from my
summers in New Hampshire. And what do you know? The answer was right there in my writing!

     I wrote a lot of poems in New Hampshire.
The seeds for my poems came from personal experiences during my summer stays in
New Hampshire, or personal experiences that I called to my memory as I was
writing for my institute classes. As I reread my poems, I realized that almost
all of them told a story about a moment or time in my life. The process I went
through to capture a life experience in a poem is much like the process I am
going through now to craft a story for my Personal Stories class, here at South
Mountain Community College. In both cases, I use all of my senses – sight,
sound, smell, taste, touch, plus my emotions to create the IMAGES that
transform my life experience into a story – a story that can be related through
personal telling or through writing a poem that tells the story. Just as
the personal story that you tell has a deeper meaning hidden inside, a point to
be pondered, so does the poem. That is the true treasure.  

     As I mold my storytelling style through
the classes that I am taking at SMCC, I would like to think about how I can
integrate some of my personal story poems into my storytelling. So I leave you
with one of my personal story poems. It is an absolutely true poem about my delight in finding a little
“treasure” on the ocean floor one summer day in New Hampshire. 

Do you want to know a secret, a
secret of the sea?

Have you ever seen a snail, one
as little as can be?

So lovely like a jewel, with
swirls of milky-brown?

A snail that paves a mini-road
over sandy ground?

One that clings to speckled
rocks, to sunbathe every day?

Do you know where this snail
sleeps? Where she tucks her head away?

 

I do.

 

I found out quite by accident,
while swimming nigh the isle.

The bottom crunched with
seashells, so I scooped me up a pile.

I shook away the gravel. It
trickled back to sea.

What was left, my hand caressed –
a shell… pure white… pearly.

I turned it toward the sun – saw
pink and purples glow. I held it way up high, brought it way down low.

That’s when I discovered a
creature fast asleep –a dainty, wee Dogwinkle. I didn’t make a peep.

 

Shhh…

 

Curled up on the seashell – soft
like satin sheets,

oh… she looked quite cozy from
head to snaily feet.

I didn’t mean to rouse her, but
she began to shift.

I murmured, “Sweet dreams, Snail.
You’re such a precious gift.”

I lowered her bed slowly, to lull
on the seafloor.

“Miss Snail, may you be blanketed
by waves forevermore.”

 

Now you know a secret, a
secret of the sea.

If you keep it secret, it will
stay a mystery.

 

-Nancy Newlin (written after visiting The Isles of the
Shoals)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

10 responses to “Personal Storytelling Through Poetry by Nancy Newlin”

  1. Anne Avatar
    Anne

    Nancy,
    I enjoyed reading your thoughts and ideas about your writing and it reminded of a William Wordsworth quote:”I have said that poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquillity.” I read your delightful poem several times, and when I read it aloud it had a rhythm much like the soft movement of peaceful waves. Thank you for sharing.

  2. Louise Laux Avatar
    Louise Laux

    What a cute poem! I like it. Perhaps you can create an atmosphere of NH that will take you there mentally, and continue to write!

  3. Kelly Avatar
    Kelly

    I believe that whatever we are doing in the present is preparation for a future undertaking. I really enjoyed the poem, Nancy.

  4. Sally Borg Avatar
    Sally Borg

    Very nice!

  5. Victoria Kelly Avatar
    Victoria Kelly

    That was lovely, and very touching and I must tell you I wanted more. I am looking forward to hearing you in class. I have one published poem, and it too was something from my personal life that I was really concerned about. Thanks so much for sharing.

  6. Sylvia Torrey Avatar

    Nancy, that was great. Loved the poem. It is such a wonderful gift to be able to write meaningful and clear poetry. You have that gift.

  7. Sandi B Avatar
    Sandi B

    Great job. What a wonderful way to tell about your history is through poetry. You are a gifted writer and teller. I enjoyed the poem and story on your blog.

  8. Cassandra Cushing Avatar

    Your language and word choice in the poem were magical. Your attention to detail in writing this poem will serve you well as a storyteller too. Painting a picture with words and taking the time to notice and draw attention to some of the smaller, seemingly less-important aspects of life enhance each moment and help create a sense of wonder, something you did quite well with your poem!

  9. phyllis ralley Avatar
    phyllis ralley

    What a gentle encounter with nature. To see it, love it, and let it go. That is true love.

  10. James Ashcroft Avatar
    James Ashcroft

    What a great example of a moment of your life captured in a portrait of words. I love to stand and let the water slip ashore past me, then block the water as it returns down into the waves. It stirs of the sand and uncovers treasures at my feet. Your imagery had me right back in the water. Thank you for sharing the gifts that you have. You are a remarkable communicator.

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