Enter the Witch by Diana Lucente

We all know the beloved story of Hansel and Gretel.  But do we ever consider that there might be other perspectives to the story?  One fascinating perspective which has been played out in many contemporary versions of the Hansel and Gretel story is that of the Wicked Witch. Many of us blindly accept the stereotype that she is the epitome of pure and quintessential evil to be to be destroyed at all costs. However, there are some modern versions of the Wicked Witch which give an alternative perpective on her predicament.  One of my favorites is a poem by Mibre Burch entitled "After Push Comes to Shove".  In this poem, the Witch provides an internal monologue which picks up from the original's storyline just after she is thrust into the oven by Gretel.  This clever poem makes one think twice about the so-called
"happy ending" of the tale.  In it, the witch is somewhat humanized, not exactly likeable, but at least better understood.  We are forced to empathize with her horrific predicament as we hear her thought processes while she literally burns to death.  In the end, presumably just before she dies, the story comes full circle:  The Wicked Witch, like Hansel and Gretel at the beginning of our beloved original tale,
becomes, in essence, "a child alone in the woods."

AFTER PUSH COMES TO SHOVE

           By Milbre Burch

 

I am curled in a fetal position

In the darkness and the heat,

Surrounded on all sides by my red-hot tomb.

My limbs tied

In a careless knot of falling inward,

Sacrificed because my own naivete

Outweighed that of a little girl.

My hair frizzles in a flash,

My eyes melt, my tongue bakes,

My flesh splits and oozes,

My grease spatters the sides of the oven.

In a way, it is a relief;

A diet of children is very rich

Both in calories and karma.

And now, by their actions,

They have become what I once was.

She tricked me, the little hussy,

Egged on by my poor eyesight and bad judgment.

Pretending to passivity no more,

She’s saved that worthless brother of hers,

All meat and ill-begun ideas.

They’ll take my treasure

The same way they gnawed my house

As if it were their due.

They’ll share their ill-gotten gains

With their foolish father.

He, meanwhile, for sentimental reasons

Will have discarded the clever second wife.

He no longer needs her thrift;

His future’s certain now.

They’ll, all of them, grow soft and mean.

The father putting aside his trade as a woodcutter

And going to brothels till

His advancing age and worthlessness

Cause his beloved children

To rid themselves of him.

If there’s any justice in the cosmos,

They’ll desert the old man

In the woods on a winter’s night.

He will have long since forgotten the way

And freeze to death before hunger gets him

Hansel and Grethel will fight

Over the inheritance, and end

By poisoning one another

With a glass of lemonade

And a dish of gingerbread.

I take some comfort in this

As my organs become ash and

I am burned away to what’s at my core:

A child alone in the woods.

(Thank you to Milbre Burch for permission to include the poem in this post!)

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4 responses to “Enter the Witch by Diana Lucente”

  1. Mark Goldman Avatar

    Nicely done Diane. Most stories can change in an instant, when looked at or TOLD from a different point of view. Each character has their own emotions and back story. The teller who understands the POV of all of the characters in a story (personal or non-personal) will have a greater understanding of the entire story, and how they will tell it.

  2. Louise Laux Avatar
    Louise Laux

    Diana, that was so interesting, and I love how you discuss the different personalities/points of view of the witch. This is something we’ve done with our children: asked them not only how Dorothy in Oz felt, but how the Tin Man, Scarecrow, Lion, the flying Monkeys or any other character felt. It really does open up the understanding of the story to examine it this way. Thanks to you and to Liz for printing the poem! It’s amazing!

  3. Sandi Brassell Avatar
    Sandi Brassell

    Diane, you certainly have opened my eyes to many aspects of Hansel and Gretal. I loved the poem that you included. You presented so many directions that the characters can go and
    you did such a good job. Great going.

  4. Sylvia Torrey Avatar

    Point of view is important in storytelling. the POV can either draw or repell those in the audience. Thanks for sharing a different point of view on the Wicked Witch of the West.

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