Six Words by Brad Auten

Ernest
Hemmingway was once challenged in a bar bet to write a story in six
words.  He worked on the story for some while and finally came up with:

“For sale:

Baby
shoes,

Never
worn”

A couple years later he decided to
call this six word short-story one of the best stories he had written. 
The reader/hearer of this story, if curious, must fill in the details with
their own imagination. 

Sometimes we
tell way too much of the story and do not leave the hearer to fill in the
blanks in their life.  Personal stories connect us especially when we
leave out many of the details.

I believe the
six word format can help us chunk our personal stories.  This short form
of our story performs the task of a mnemonic device to inform us and leaving
art to take over the function of the story.  Smith  magazine has a project on this
device called Six-Word Memoirs which, “seeks to provide a platform for
storytelling in all of its forms.  Can you tell your life story is just
six words?  This eventually became the book, Not Quite What I Was Planning:   Six-Word Memoirs from Writers
Famous & Obscure
, which
quickly became a New York Times bestseller.  Two examples are:

“Failed SAT.

Lost scholarship.

Invented rocket.”
William Shatner

“This
is

a
short

blog
duh!”

-Brad Auten

I once
heard that literary critic Edgar Allan Poe call the Prodigal Son (a parable
from Luke 15) the greatest short story ever written.  This same feature is
at work in parable allowing the hearer to fill in the details from his/her
perspective.  In this way it opens meaning – and connects the teller and
the listener.

 

9 responses to “Six Words by Brad Auten”

  1. Louise Laux Avatar
    Louise Laux

    I enjoy the way you present stories. You include some sweet stuff in your stories. I also love the Hemingway story. Papa sure knew how to spin a yarn and make you think.
    Thanks for the tip on the other book. I’m going to look that up! Keep on telling, Brad!

  2. Nancy Newlin Avatar
    Nancy Newlin

    Brad, What you share is so true for me. I always go on and on and on. I did a similar writing experience in another storytelling that I took with a wonderful storyteller named Janice Del Negro. We had to take our story and write it in 3 short lines. it was so hard for me to do this. I needed the help of my partner to help me “cut out” all the excess. I am going to try to use the writing exercise you shared to get to the point of my story, to get to the heart of my story. I loved your BEE story and I hope you share more about your experiences with the bees. You have such a natural way of telling. Nancy

  3. Cassandra Cushing Avatar

    Yup, brevity really forces a teller to get to the heart of the matter, and sometimes discerning ornaments from the tree itself is trickier than it sounds: “but that one sparkles so! How could I leave it off?!”
    Not sure where I would start with my 6 words. Perhaps:
    “large family, identity quest, ongoing adventure”
    Hmmm…..

  4. Tui Conner Avatar
    Tui Conner

    Although I’m glad Liz has not asked for any 6 word stories, I appreciate the concept. Keeping our stories to specific lengths is the same thing – cut out the details that don’t move the story ahead; be specific with your words; get the listeners in and out and leave them laughing or crying or thinking.

  5. Sally Borg Avatar
    Sally Borg

    The 6 word story idea is so interesting. In my spare time, I’m going to try to write MY six word story. That book sounds fascinating!

  6. Sylvia Torrey Avatar

    Brad,
    There is definitely somthing to be said for allowing the listener to add their own experience to the story. it gives us something to think about as we relate more fully. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

  7. Victoria Kelly Avatar
    Victoria Kelly

    Born
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    This was great, and something that should really be thought about. Great work.

  8. Sandra Brassell Avatar
    Sandra Brassell

    Brad: HOw I loved the six word story. I know that I sometimes tell too much in my stories and do’t leave a lot for more imagination. I love you listen to your words from your stories and am always ready to hear the next one.

  9. Brad Auten Avatar
    Brad Auten

    Thanks for the wonderful comments – i will tell the story of ceviche tonight

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